Wow this isn't bad at all! I really like it. If you're a musician and willing to collab, hit me up :)
I would probably add some more variation to the melody perhaps. Then maybe adjust the drums add a little bit of harmonics in there. I really like the main melody though.
Okay! :) I'm working in a new project, it's a long piece divided in 2 parts, if you want, you can contact me on private and I'll send you some samples.
Would be good with some drum snare, right now you only got kicks and maybe add also some variations like some hi-hat and make the kicks respond to the melody. Otherwise solid track you got there.
Thx man :D. I'll take your points in consideration ;).
Master this with a bit more of a story to it. Like, intro, first instruments, build on the instruments, solo/main melody, alternate interments/bridge, outro. This is the plot for most of my tracks and it works very well. After you have done that, master the shit out of it. NOW YOU HAVE A GREAT TRACK! Good job on the drums and i love the catchy piano tunes you have here.
Keep it up!! ;D^
Very ambient and cool!
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